Review Detail of Helldragon_xd in *VOID*

The plot is quite interesting, but I think you should focus more on worldbuilding and describing some more stuff in detail. As a English reader, some of the words you used in foreign languages could also use descriptions in describing what they mean. I wish we knew more about the MC aside from being evil, like maybe some positive sides about him. Maybe he's greedy and would do stuff for money, but perhaps he's also kind to the poor, etc. Stuff like this would be a villain that readers could sympathize with. Physical descriptions also help too. Aside from those, some grammar polishing could help out your story too. Keep up the good work and hope to see improvements.