Review Detail of Leylin_Farlier99 in Pokémon: Dragon Master's Tale (original)

this fanfic is amazing. the grammer is perfect with no spelling mistakes and almost zero grammatical error. the protagonist is smart and is ambitious. his family background might not be as influential as oak family but is fairly good. our protagonist drake prioritizes his ambition above all things. he is aspiring to become a dragon master and I must say is doing a great job. he doesn't sympathize with others and is not a hero of justice. he has 4 pokemon which are a dragonair, shiny charmeleon, shiny scizor, shiny tauros but he uses tauros for transportation. his pokemon are much stronger than there species. overall his character is good, he is ambitious, takes care of his pokemon and kills pokemon and humans for the motives if required but is not necessarily evil. this fanfiction has potential to reach on top and i hope it reaches its potential. you have done a great job in making this fanfic author san hope you continue making such progress and please do increase the chapters per-day. thank you and best of luck.