Item: Ultimate Earthbender (Dropped)
Rating: 2.2
Author: JManM

JManMLv53yr

2021-08-03 06:21

I want to like this story, and I sorta did at the start. The MC started out as someone who went after what he wants, but quickly ran out of things to want. The author is now switching to third person because his OC MC has so little additional perspective he can't write from his POV anymore. At this point Lu Chen exists to win fights and give vague hints. He is lube for the original cast, and provides no impact of his own anymore.

Ultimate Earthbender (Dropped)

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Replies2

TheTwoTwoAuthor

your judging it way too early, my guy. We're not even halfway to the day of the invasion.

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TheTwoTwoAuthor

and also, I got tired of writing 'I' so much. I felt like I was repeating every sentence.

3yr

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