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JManM
JManMLv53yr
2021-08-03 06:21

I want to like this story, and I sorta did at the start. The MC started out as someone who went after what he wants, but quickly ran out of things to want. The author is now switching to third person because his OC MC has so little additional perspective he can't write from his POV anymore. At this point Lu Chen exists to win fights and give vague hints. He is lube for the original cast, and provides no impact of his own anymore.

Ultimate Earthbender (Dropped)

TheTwoTwo
4.6
25 Chs

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TheTwoTwo
TheTwoTwoAuthor

your judging it way too early, my guy. We're not even halfway to the day of the invasion.

3yr
TheTwoTwo
TheTwoTwoAuthor

and also, I got tired of writing 'I' so much. I felt like I was repeating every sentence.

3yr
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THIS IS GOLD! I HAVE BEEN SEARCHING FOR A GOOD OCxTOPH FAN-FIC FOR YEARS AND I FINALLY FOUND THE GOLD!! PRAISE THE AUTHOR! PRAISE THIS MAN!

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Herobrine81
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I like his personality and the abilities he got. not too overpowered and not too weak it is just perfect!good job.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Minion14
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This fanfics a bit above average, and the only problem I have with it is the MC having a IQ between 73-85. He's not that bright at all. Though he's pretty strong so I guess that cancels out how dumb he is. The fanfic is almost exactly like canon except for a couple fight scenes, but it's basically the same as canon.

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crinix
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I really liked the story in the start. Then it started going downhill... nothing new just the same ol'canon (may change later but rn it's pretty much canon)...MC gets new bending like they are candy..and he is pretty stupid ( then again everyone is stupid sometimes ). But main point is that it's pretty dull and plain story... you'll get bored reading it after few chapters. if it changes in future I'll delete this review. Bye...Good luck

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As the master of NOHAREMSECT, it's my duty to support one of my disciple by giving you a 5 heavenly star pills to help you defeated those Young masters from the other sects. NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT

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BookWizard23412
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Very good. Мне в падлу писать на английском. Так что скажу на русском. Автор ты большой молодец, продолжай в том же духе!!!

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I'm excited since I don't think I've seen a novel where the mc is an earth bender. I've voted this a 5-star since I haven't read any of it yet so let's hope you will do good author.

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