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SUBARSHIII!!!!! Hope you keep going, and update more. Should be intersting to have him feel and try to manipulate mana inside himself, to train control and all, maybe the whole 'compress e let go' thing to grow his amounts of mana. Honestly i would like very much if the romance were to be with Juvia(ie. best girl) since he had problems with his past relationship, a new one with a very loving girl(pseudo-yandere) like Juvia might be interesting to work with from the insert POV.

Overall good story, no grammar issues either. The dialogue is good and so is the description and world building. The updating stability could be a lot better, as it's pretty inconsistent, but it's fine.

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First ever review, really enjoying the story so far hope it continues. Should be interesting. Hope it updates. Random comment. Random comment. Random comment. Random comment.

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