maybe I have high hope for this First of all, you don't have to give him haki second of all, you don't have reincarnation him for his power third of all the MC is an idiot he doesn't look like Adult at all

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the only bad aspects is update time other than that , perfect .....................................................................................................................

Concept Is cool, not seen any fanfics interpret Marcos fruit so props to the author for creativity. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes but not anything that disturbs enjoying the novel. Character design is sort of lazy with Ao essentially being Gojo. Update stability is good ( mass releasing at the moment) World background is self explanatory being MHA

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rlly liked it dnc abt plot holes and unique quirk havent seen pheonix used beforethats why i like this and give it a 5 star tho imo its 4 but have a 5 star u deserve it cause u can write a story better then a lot no matter what everyone else says

Still in it's initial phase with 5 chapters as of this review but overall a good concept and writing for a first time writer.[img=recommend]