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Mockingbird_2179
Mockingbird_2179Lv41yr
2023-07-24 06:42

The story is good but here are the problems that I have with this story.× After 4 chapters all the smuts been removed. × It needs a note for the scene changes. It is a jarring experience to go from training and making plans to having a different conversation with someone else.

HARRY POTTER: ASCENSION BOOK 1

Ser_borgur
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Kono_Timoda
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For those that are scared that thier is no synopsis: Lily, harry potter's mother, gets in contact with Kryptonian tech and gives harry Kryptonian DNA, changing his personality and changing his course in life. It seems like it's a DC + Harry potter verse. The first chapter is a prologue and is long but it sets the pace for the story. Harry's POV starts in chapter 2 with a 10 year overview and time skip. Th author's writing style holds my interest well and balances world building with character development really well. And I have not been able to spot any errors so 👍👍 (As of chapter 2 🙃) I feel as if this is a hidden gem in the making which can be on par with "meta essence". Good job author and I like the daily updates and can't wait for more.😃

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Solrac
SolracLv5

the story is really good and the writing quality is good but there is places in the writing that are hard to read or that is like there is paragraphs that are missing

2yr
JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

Written at chapter 7. So far, this has been a great read, but it has a few problems. Which are. 1. It's hard to tell if there has been a change in the scene. 2. You can't tell if there has been a timeskip. 3. There's not much on world building making it hard to truly dive into the story. Other than that, I would highly recommend this story.

2yr
TROUXA
TROUXALv2

The story is incomplete with a lot of information being taken from chapters as well as scenes +18 Other than that the story is great. If you liked it read in archive of our own to see the complete novel

2yr
darknightofAnime
darknightofAnimeLv14

Sauce for the wonder woman cover pic please.

2yr
Torrinth
TorrinthLv15

Just search the title to get the whole story.

1yr
why_me_4761
why_me_4761Lv14

this is one of the best books I've ever read

2yr
william_stinnett
william_stinnettLv4

Reveal spoiler

1mth
Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

It was an ok read. Though i would like to say, there is such a thing as too much. MC already has so much women that it feels like hes collecting pokemon. Also i dont see how the dc crossover is a good idea. I would have hoped it was a one and done just to give mc powers but it turns out its the whole damn universe, mc already has too many women in wizarding world alone.. why bother with dc characters

3mth
DaoistF21Iop
DaoistF21IopLv4

it is good but has been changed much by introducing other elements in hp novel.

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