Review Detail of bennylokku in Unbreakable Love (Saiki XTeruhashi ) .(haitus)

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bennylokkuLv12yrbennylokku

what the fuck is this. the first 3 chapters made sense now its all gone haywire wtf author this had so much potential but youre not doing it justice

Unbreakable Love (Saiki XTeruhashi ) .(haitus)

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ArkmissAuthorArkmiss

I'm Really new to writing so that would be a big help help to me currently

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ArkmissAuthorArkmiss

Ah thank you for your reveiw.I will try to do better no promises 😂

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ArkmissAuthorArkmiss

If you can please tell me what you disliked so I can improve .How did it go haywire

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