Review Detail of Rowan_Jay in Welcome To Terminus

Reviewed up to chapter 8. The writing quality is on the rough side. The POV switches mid-scene - however, this does seem to be a trend on Webnovel in general -, the pros don't quite flow, and there are grammar errors peppered throughout. However, the writing quality improves dramatically after the first two chapters. The story is paced well. While fast, it allows time to set up the relationship between the main characters, their situation, and their initial goals before getting thrown into the plot. While the character descriptions are in "blocks" the characters themselves have personalities. Beyond some of the dialogue being on the janky side, the characters have unique voices. And I do appreciate the relationship between the leads. It's obvious they care about each other. The world has some unique qualities to it. It's obvious that the writer is well versed in a range of anime and pop culture, and that shows in the world-building. :)