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TofSpades
TofSpadesLv33yr
2021-07-10 18:32

Overall, it was a decent read. I'm not a fan of present tense writing but this worked well with the flow of the story. The stability of updates can be improved; We need more chaps Author san! Nevertheless, I can see this book becoming a starlet for sure if the author keeps writing. Keep it up Author!

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Thanks !! it help a lot, i'll try to keep steady update of 1 chapter a day too

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