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Charmelle_Souzey
Charmelle_SouzeyLv11yr
2023-11-09 03:29

I just started reading this book and I'm so obsessed with it. It's sad that the relationship between a master and disciple isn't allowed. But all in all great job author[img=recommend]

Be Gentle, Immortal Master

Witchhazel
4.9
313 Chs

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Witchhazel
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Thank you! And don’t worry, they’ll get past that no problem! 😊

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