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yourghostwriterLv103yr
2021-07-21 04:45

It’s a really well written story! I love the characterization progress of the MC. Plus the plot is very interesting and unique as well! I’m really loving it already! Kudos to the author!!!

Be Gentle, Immortal Master

Witchhazel
4.9
313 Chs

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I am in awe of this book, from the way it’s beautifully written (it is stunningly beautiful), to the storyline, and the characters themselves. Seriously, the details the author uses to paint the world the characters live in and how she describes and uses the most amazing imagery to set it all up. Just WOW. And the depth of the Bai Ye and Yun Qing-er. I cannot get enough. Their love story has so much passion and thoughtfulness entertwined and tightly tangled. And I’m only on Chapter 55! It’s that good!!! Please read this. You are seriously missing out on a beautiful love story. You can tell the author cares so much about her story and how she tells it. So so so good!!!!

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An interesting take on cultivation, focusing rather on romance. The book cover is amazing, synopsis alluring and the contents... I love it! 💖 The author has an excellent way of describing intimate scenes that just captivates the reader... It is so satisfying. I can't wait to read more!! Beautiful work, author💖

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An lovely and intriguing story i've ever read. I got bored and this novel saved me. At first I was confused with the characters because it's hard for me to remember their names (You know I was not that really fan at chinese name) but at the end I fell inlove with them! and looking forward for them.☺️ After all your work is well written it's easy for me to understand and it's give me idea to apply it to myself. And looking forward for the other chapters. keep it up and goodluck!❤

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😍😍😍😍 barely 50 chapters in and I’m hooked ! I never knew I needed this type of story in my life. for once it’s not the typical cultivation story. This story is more bold and I absolutely love it. Keep this going author!

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A more than pleasant bump into this story that I usually won't give it a go. Thought a cultivator's world is something too fairy tale like / imaginary to my liking. Boy I was caught off guard. The writer's amazing penmanship is able to transport me to fighting scenes, back in time scenes, mystical creatures and magic scenes, steamy sensual scenes... you name it... all effortlessly. The plot and character developments are beautiful and the pace is just right. No boring draggy parts, no loopholes with good editing. Recommend readers to reread the story again to appreciate the back story more. 👍

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nothing can be better than this...i m loving it so muh that 3 am is like 3 pm for me while reading it. BAI YE...i can feel his gentle nature to my bones including his white robes....how i wish there was such a Chinese drama!!!!!!..but there is not....atleast a comic can do.. but nohting can compare this written novel....yet to read it completely and i m gonna do it. GREAT WORK AUTHOR!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘

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