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Nobuna_Gawara
Nobuna_GawaraLv13yr
2021-07-12 12:46

The plot twist and the story' Is so good. The character Is very very interested . This story' Is very Psychological . The background of every murder Is very interested . I can't wait for the next chapter

THE ZODIAC SERIES : C A P R I C O R N (THE SHY PSYCHOPATH)

Juan_2032
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17 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The story is a gem. I can feel my emotions to well up with just reading it. I mean, the author was very effective in doing that. Gosh, I pity the girl and won't blame her if she wants revenge. I mean her innocence were abused. And then revenge time! Fight on!

3yr

Sumayya_Riaz
Sumayya_RiazLv2

Great work! such an amazing and interesting web novel. I like it very much. keep it up, author!👍👍 You had designed the character, very good.

3yr
javierlop
javierlopLv1

The Story Is very interested and i like it , The Character is very good and very interested , The Author is a very Good Author and i cant wait for the next chapter

3yr
Nandy_Q
Nandy_QLv14

English does not seem to be the authors first language but she I'd doing a great Job. it is a great story over all. I just wish we could get more mystery from our main character. I love me a good psychopath

3yr
Erfan_Sh
Erfan_ShLv1

Nice! The story looks good. It has a nice plot and the writing quality is also good. I personally like the story. Would like to support you.

3yr
_OB_
_OB_Lv1

an awesome storyline, the author's use of words are just mwah, I love how the story is going, keep up the good work <3...................................................

3yr
swarnadeepsaha2005
swarnadeepsaha2005Lv1

This story is really good. The plot is nice and the writing quality is also nice. I want to read more from this writer. I loved the work.

3yr
kidd17
kidd17Lv1

first time I read it, I thought jump to the story, I hope you can turned your introducing into stories, which is fun, and make a little dramatic about it. But I disappointed because that. I thought when I read first chapter I will brought to introducing stories like describe while the stories go on. But it's enjoyable to read! I really wanted to say it's not bad! I hope you can fix the revenge stories into a full rage revenge. Good luck!

3yr
tanny88
tanny88Lv5

yours is a interesting story. Its thrilling. And because of phsycopatic theme, I think you choose a good theme. Best of luck...... [img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Wondering_Reader
Wondering_ReaderLv3

The characters arent the best and there isnt too much depth. But did i ever say that matters? Can i get a satisfying revenge story? Yes? Thats wonderful. The writing quality isnt top tier, but it definitely conveys the revenge statisfaction very well. i liked it a lot.

3yr
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