story is great till chapter 10. before that it is immersive af. my main criticism is on the ra*e of the child and the fact that the mc got done in the way he did. like ya really did minato and the rest pretty fkin dirty by putting the mc in that situation, it just felt really forced. i am not marking down anything on the rating due to the fact that it IS your story, and it would be unfair to mark ya down just cuz the story changed too much for my liking 😅 no hard feelings author-sama, i just couldn't stand the fact that the mc got removed/killed off like that... or that the village turned on such a powerhouse who obviously cared for konoha (from at least his actions)
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