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Astralek
AstralekLv21yr
2023-01-14 14:04

Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason. Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end. The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality. I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything. Author, I want to kill you.

Transmigrated as Saitama with a Mission System

Kurosawa_Taiki
3.5
76 Chs

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Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4

Yeah I just tried to read through but every time I read it just gets harder to read, random 4th wall breaks or ranting about thinks I haven't even seen others comment on. Random powers even though none of them are needed dude becomes a sword master but can barely describe what a sword even looks like. Imma be honest only started reading cause Fubiki but its not even Fubiki its a transmigrater in Fubiki. He hides powers for the plot... all that. In my eyes the translation isn't terrible but it gets harder and harder to read is you get further in. And it just follows the stroy without much change, which is boring but I don't blame the author for it.

3yr

Omnireadereader
OmnireadereaderLv4

Just having fubuki as the main romance girl and this not having harem is enough for me to make it like this.................................

3yr
Orvar
OrvarLv1

I don't know how this isn't super popular, the writing quality is good, the events follow the anime, but are changed, Saitama has hair and there is an interesting mystery element with Fubuki,

3yr
Kurosawa_Taiki
Kurosawa_TaikiAuthor

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3yr
reducetheprices
reducethepricesLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv14

There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.

2yr
8ightbit
8ightbitLv4

See; this is what I don't understand about these types of fanfics, It is basically just cannon with slight changes.. Author why would we read a fanfic, if the story is the same as cannon?!?!?! who would do that? I'd rather just read the original if that is the case,, apart from small changes here and there, it isn't anything interesting.. and not even funny like how this series was supposed to be.. (SD1/5) writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5) stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5) character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5).. world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building.. honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)

2yr
FcKyOu
FcKyOuLv2

trash stories with mc have too much power and don't have good control (for writers it's been good). even having a lot of power can't keep his mind from being read by others, well I suggest you guys don't read this garbage.oh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guardingoh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guarding mind so that it is not easy to read

3yr
nooms
noomsLv4

the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well.... I just waste my time reading this!!!!

2yr
ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv4

Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain. Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes. Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that. Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic. World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc. Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.

2yr
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