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Gool_Tv
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2021-12-23 02:48

NobleQueenBee is a master storyteller. I've read alot of titles on WebNovel some good some bad. This novel falls well into the former category. It's a perfect blend of charachters, world building,plot, and magic that keeps me reading to see what happens next. If I take each individual category (character s, world building,plot) by themselves. They are solid, but not the best I've seen. It's the pace, presentaion, and story telling that really makes this a good novel. While the novel has humor and is on the lighter side of the spectrum. It has its darker undertones especially in the begining of the novel (Aurora's back story). All in all Its a great novel. I don't really like FL but this is an exception. I recommend you take a look. Now as a side note. When and if you take the plunge, there will be a character named Renat. I won't spoil but I recommend that we petition to get him killed off or maimed. you'll understand when you get there. he's a really a despicable and vile creature, an antagonist through and through. I personally prefer him crippled. He must suffer for his crimes & future crimes can't let him off to easily...

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NobleQueenBee
NobleQueenBeeAuthor

Thank you so much for this review! It brought happy tears to my eyes (and then I laughed until I cried on that second part😂). As for Renat, I look forward to your comments as he grows and develops (or maybe dies, the jury is still out🙃).

Gool_Tv
Gool_TvLv14

lol don't kill him he must pay 😂

NobleQueenBee:Thank you so much for this review! It brought happy tears to my eyes (and then I laughed until I cried on that second part😂). As for Renat, I look forward to your comments as he grows and develops (or maybe dies, the jury is still out🙃).
Dauphne_Maples
Dauphne_MaplesLv15

I like Renat and thInk that he should end up as MarwIn's Emporer Consort when she becomes Empress! Afterall, Deverim has already said he reminds him of himself when he was young, and it's a family tradition falling in love with and marrying "commoners" - LOL!! 💕💋🥰

Gool_Tv
Gool_TvLv14

no dear reader that vile creature has fooled you with his charms don't fall for it like meriwen lol he'd be a terrible emporer consort with all his stuttering.also not sure meriwen gets the throne she is only 12 years younger than aurora. by the time aurora dies of natural causes it would be better to give aurora and Devrim's first child the throne

Dauphne_Maples:I like Renat and thInk that he should end up as MarwIn's Emporer Consort when she becomes Empress! Afterall, Deverim has already said he reminds him of himself when he was young, and it's a family tradition falling in love with and marrying "commoners" - LOL!! 💕💋🥰
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Photosphere
PhotosphereLv14

Been a long time since I had such a good read. *Writing Quality: Excellent Delivery, although a little long, paragraphs are well structured, I'd usually not put myself more than a single dialogue per paragraph unless a dialogue it's accompanied by an inner monologue, but that's a personal preference, everything else is genuine, the story is easy to follow, there are no flamboyant terminologies that someone with average English can understand, 10/10. *Stability of Updates: It has a firm schedule, hence, 10/10. *Story Development: Surreal, it gives an accurate description of the background of the world, the royal court, the MC's status, how she lives and her feelings, it develops slowly into the promised premise (Become a fitting Queen) while giving it the surrealism of how actual monarchy would work, it's marvellous, 10/10. *Character Design: I have to say I was flabbergasted with the relationship between the family trio at the start of the series, never expected to identify myself with the FL to the point that I felt bad for her, after reading so much, such self-identification substance is lost, but I truly felt bad for her and hated the Empress to the core, in mere chapters, that speaks a lot of how characters are portrayed, their dialogues and the subtle details that speak louder than words and insults, still... here is where I find the only flaw in this novel, Devrim. His inclusion was too abrupt to the point it felt heterogeneous to the entire development prior, Aurora's reaction shouldn't have been to readily accept a candidate (even if she's choosing him herself) after having her mother reject her in such a way her entire life while her father was hopeless to protect her, she'd have trust issues. After her father, the only person that could salvage her, moved on, she'd enclose herself and trust no one, she'd eventually open her heart to Devrim and call him a friend, but perhaps after several tests acknowledge friendship, this is the only matter that ended up being 'surrealist' to me, compared to the rest of what I read. *World Background: Accurately described, the only thing I'd probably improve is to use the scenery description to boost the relevance of a scene, if a meeting is casual like spring and floating grass or as torrential as the rain which thunderstrikes, a dusty meeting with feelings in between, the atmosphere description will always enhance the perception of a scene, among other description such as geography and etc... which I can't touch upon as those depend of the scope of your novel. Overall, one of the best stories I have read on this site gave me a vibe of Les Miserables for some reason with the father being Jean Valjean, but that's my opinion. Best Regards!

The_Procrastinator
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