So far from what I read, The plot point is quite interesting, it adds some mystery and good build-up on the happening especially with the main character Vicky. What I like about this novel it's bringing some kind of dark atmosphere especially with the beginning that is quite shocking. As for the main character, Vicky, I think she could be a really interesting female lead in WN which is a quiet hidden gem. For the con is mostly based on my opinion or taste which is there is one paragraph that literally likes a wall of text and I recommend to split up into two or three paragraphs, to make the reader more comfort to read. I think that's all I have to say and Thank you very much, Keep up the good work, and can't wait for other chapters to come.
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