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JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv23yr
2021-08-19 15:21

So far from what I read, The plot point is quite interesting, it adds some mystery and good build-up on the happening especially with the main character Vicky. What I like about this novel it's bringing some kind of dark atmosphere especially with the beginning that is quite shocking. As for the main character, Vicky, I think she could be a really interesting female lead in WN which is a quiet hidden gem. For the con is mostly based on my opinion or taste which is there is one paragraph that literally likes a wall of text and I recommend to split up into two or three paragraphs, to make the reader more comfort to read. I think that's all I have to say and Thank you very much, Keep up the good work, and can't wait for other chapters to come.

Vicky's Reality

Frost_Reaper_1820
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330 Chs

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Frost_Reaper_1820Author

Thank you for the really beautiful review. I will check the paragraph you have pointed here. Thank you very much :)

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Lancee
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A masterpiece in the making. Great storyline so far , a proper plot that develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.

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Frost_Reaper_1820Author

Thank you for checking out my novel. I will be updating this novel daily. The plot of the story is based on virtual reality, and the experiences the main character, Vicky has in and out of the game. Each character has a complex personality, that I hope you guys will love throughout the story. Please feel free to leave comments and reviews about the novel. I hope you guys enjoy ^-^

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Erfan_Sh
Erfan_ShLv1

Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you all the best in your writing career

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Impeccable, the choice of words was splendid. I think the plot was what made this novel into something great. Sci-Fi was a difficult genre and with its quality based on your first book, then I must conclude that you are a talented one. Good luck in the future! I hope more readers will come and enjoy your work. 👍

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Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3

Nice concept and plot, romrcommended to anyone who likes to read and is enjoyable and relaxing. I hope you make it to your writing career....................

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CodeyVanilla
CodeyVanillaLv10

A very nice read. I enjoyed how the author is able to engage his readers. I would totally recommend it to everyone. A very nice job, author.

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Maxene_Perera
Maxene_PereraLv1

This story has a great plot. The way the author has portrayed the story, makes the story very interesting. Hard to believe this is the authors first novel.

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The_Unknown_3118
The_Unknown_3118Lv1

A very interesting story about virtual reality. Would definitely recommend for all readers. Nice plot, and storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter. All the best for the author.

3yr
MackenzieNdiweni
MackenzieNdiweniLv2

It's a Sci-fi Novel guys, I'm a huge fan of sci-fi and the way this guy portrait his story it's actually not really bad, the detailed background and characters make this novep pretty lit. I recommend you this one👌👌👌

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