first of all the story is very interesting like mysteries of hxh. I even think the author of this ff is the real author togashi π π . His theory about nen or dark continent are really fascinating, also the other things like pariston hill his attitude even isn't show completely in anime, author speculated that in this story. The only downside are misspelled words, and unnecessary information in the story are really too much to me, I even skip some of that. Those things become useless some readers already knows that. I've also felled annoyed because author showing it redundantly that's information, it's understandable showing it first time for the readers. He even forgot the most important details because he focused to much unnecessary details maybe author want higher counting words. It's really a nice story if the author minimized that kind of thing. Hope you improve the next novel you creating. ππ
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