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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv53yr
2022-02-04 08:15

▪︎Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development.....☆☆○○○ - to be honest... its getting boring. their's not much "story" in this ff. ▪︎Character Design........☆☆○○○ - he's more like a crazy drug addict. ▪︎Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.......☆☆○○○ - I don't know if this is still about mha anymore.

Reborn as A Demon(MHA)

BlackSwordman1234
4.6
14 Chs

Liked it!

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BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

That is fair. Still MHA though, I just add more from the world as being stuck in a tiny country like Japan would be borring. Some don’t like it though.

3yr
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JUST_S0ME_GUY
JUST_S0ME_GUYLv3

me see. me read. me like. me review. me wait for more chapters. me support the author.👹 from just another guy who likes trading fanfics. 👺

3yr

bookfighterdzd
bookfighterdzdLv2

Best new villain fic that Ive seen being written. MC is not evil to just be evil. Hes not completly mad and only wants chaos and suffering. So this fic gets 5 stars for me all around.

3yr
JokesOnYou
JokesOnYouLv3

Excellent story so far no time wasted getting to it. The story flow is smooth and it’s written well, I like the personality of the MC and looking forward to more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
zylverFox
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Crem_Y
Crem_YLv14

Great story I think you should keep writing and this story has a lot of potential….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

3yr
TheOneTrueFBI
TheOneTrueFBILv13

love the story so far can we get more ,,..................... periods to fill up the word limit................................................

2yr
DaoistI8K4Fr
DaoistI8K4FrLv4

I read till Chapter 7(there are no more at the moment) and i really enjoy the idea of an Demon in MHA. There are some grammar error's here and there but the writing style is superior to most Fan_Fics out there.

3yr
THCisMe
THCisMeLv4

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antho_sus
antho_susLv2

i watched every chapter of this and this awesome the mc is really evil everything is good i love it so much i hope one day there will be a new chapter

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