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I really like this novel, it is interesting and has a unique system twist. Character development so far is good. And the way you progressed the story shows you have talent. Needs a little bit of polishing. Few of the scenes feel rushed . Though I understand you want to make it humourous, but the synopsis shows that this book has a suspense-thriller theme. And I still think the prologue chapter needs some more refining, especially the beginning narrative. Anyway keep writing ! I 'll definitely support and keep your book.

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