Review Detail of FourPeaches in Back For My Daughter
Review detail
It is an interesting story, the writing quality is good, stability is good, story development isn't new but has enough new elements that to make it interesting. The character design is typical of urban novels in fact sometimes a little to similar, but mc has child making it better. The MC isn't all that great, he is infected with the denseness, but also the good guy, forgiving type giving everyone 100 chances and he does not trying to get to bottom of things, it is hard to imagine him as an old wise person. The world building up this point isn't done too much but based on everything else it would probably be decent. Don't expect a vastly different story then other urban stories, but I liked it. So if you are fan of the genre and tags then give a go. The MC is a bit annoying at times but it is only 32 chapter up to this point and hopefully he will change.
Back For My Daughter
HaoShu
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If it is true that the MC of your story reached the top of a cultivation world in 5000 years, but forgive and give opportunity after opportunity without killing, then there is something very wrong with your MC and he was in a false cultivation world, to unless the mc is weak and can only be stepped on and give opportunities.
HaoShu:happy that u liked and will sure try to improve the MC's character in the mortal world now
buddy if u have read the chaps u will know he had killed 100 of thousands of people in a single go, he just doesn't want to kill anyone on earth just cause they threatened him. but later there will be change in his behavior so don't think he will always be same
daoistosrio546:If it is true that the MC of your story reached the top of a cultivation world in 5000 years, but forgive and give opportunity after opportunity without killing, then there is something very wrong with your MC and he was in a false cultivation world, to unless the mc is weak and can only be stepped on and give opportunities.
daoistosrio546:If it is true that the MC of your story reached the top of a cultivation world in 5000 years, but forgive and give opportunity after opportunity without killing, then there is something very wrong with your MC and he was in a false cultivation world, to unless the mc is weak and can only be stepped on and give opportunities.
I understand then I will give it a chance, I have been looking for good novels and I cannot find it, but I want to ask, is the cultivation of your mc suppressed by the laws of the land or did it lose everything?
HaoShu:how about you read chap 4
well he has lost his original power man u need to read the first 3 to 6 chaps for knowing the reason it has been given in detail
daoistosrio546:I understand then I will give it a chance, I have been looking for good novels and I cannot find it, but I want to ask, is the cultivation of your mc suppressed by the laws of the land or did it lose everything?
Why is it so bad though? He lived 5000 years or more is character should already be fleshed out especially given he lived in a cultivation world
HaoShu:happy that u liked and will sure try to improve the MC's character in the mortal world now
HaoShu:buddy if u have read the chaps u will know he had killed 100 of thousands of people in a single go, he just doesn't want to kill anyone on earth just cause they threatened him. but later there will be change in his behavior so don't think he will always be same
Worn_out_by:Why is it so bad though? He lived 5000 years or more is character should already be fleshed out especially given he lived in a cultivation world
So what will take him to kill them? his family is killed?, I mean i get not wanting to attract trouble but just letting people go is plain stupid there are many ways to retaliate even without directly killing. How about curses, Assassination or ruin their business, Heck just threaten them. All the mc is doing for the last 30 chapters is 'you can not punch me one last chance '--->'you have knife don't use it i giving one last chance'-->'You also have gun don't use it i am giving you one last chance'-->'Now you have nothing to threaten me so i am giving you one last chance'. Why is he so stupid after living 5000 years in cultivation world. Don't get me wrong i loved the story that's why i am even reading it but MC is just ruining it for me.
HaoShu:buddy if u have read the chaps u will know he had killed 100 of thousands of people in a single go, he just doesn't want to kill anyone on earth just cause they threatened him. but later there will be change in his behavior so don't think he will always be same
yeah I can understand what u want to say, the mc is just too naive like and would not change till chap 90 but later due to sudden change of events his thought changes and he will get more angry or I this case, likely to kill many if one were to touch his reverse scale, i.e. His family abr daughter😘🤗😠😡😤
lord_couchpotato:So what will take him to kill them? his family is killed?, I mean i get not wanting to attract trouble but just letting people go is plain stupid there are many ways to retaliate even without directly killing. How about curses, Assassination or ruin their business, Heck just threaten them. All the mc is doing for the last 30 chapters is 'you can not punch me one last chance '--->'you have knife don't use it i giving one last chance'-->'You also have gun don't use it i am giving you one last chance'-->'Now you have nothing to threaten me so i am giving you one last chance'. Why is he so stupid after living 5000 years in cultivation world. Don't get me wrong i loved the story that's why i am even reading it but MC is just ruining it for me.