Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Shinde Inc.

The story is really great! It was really immersive both in comedy and the actual plot of the novel. The characters are well-written and have their own voices echoing inside my head! And the author placed a lot of effort describing the ghosts/sprits of those yokais and whatnot! The only thing that I could comment on are the passive voice misuse (were gathering, we're swaying). You could change these and make them in an active verb (gathered, swayed) to improve the lines written in the chapters. You should also explained what happened about the COVID-19. Although this is happening during 2019-2021, if people around 2030 read this book, they would have no idea about covid (unless they learned about it from their schools). Explaining those little details would allow readers to know the pandemic limiting the MC's abilities during their work. Kudos for the author!