Review Detail of ChokDe in My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Good novel but I hate the writing style. I'll go over what I like first. The characters a fleshed out and feel alive. The world feels well thought out and have good potential. The antagonists are dumb and cliche but it works and makes sense. That's a pro for me. Now for the cons. I don't know if it's just me but the writing style is absolutely horrendous and this is with an editor. Everything is grammatically correct but the flow is off and the tenses feels all over the place even if it was used correctly. I dislike looking at the sentence structure and reading through it. This flaw is enough for me to drop the novel because I can't stand it. It would be a different story if the grammar was incorrect because I would be able to correct the sentence structure in my head and move on but because it's written the way it is, I can't ignore it. To sum up- if you don't mind the writing style this is a really good story .