Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start" MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names. For that I give it a low translation rating. Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it. MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them. Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar. OP Beast check poor family check immediate beast tide to show off beast, check. There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat. If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.
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