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RaiderD
RaiderDLv143yr
2021-10-13 01:15

OK now it´s official, the Story is f.... up .... random jumps, sometimes buy thing then don´t have them, charactors appears randomly (no story when joining) autor must be drunk or smoke all day..... rly.... good story potential but that crashed it Look ch 73: before Irene (Nun) wasn´t in the team, now she is it, Q: when did she join and how?!!!!! CH 68: buy Elementary swimming skill books 500. Intermediate swimming skill books 1000. -> CH 71 gets swimming skill book that he needs the most -.-

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try reading Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

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undead2146Lv5

I hate Inconsistency the most in a novel. because if an author can’t be bothered to keep track of what’s happening in his novel it is not worth my time reading

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