Out side of lack of creativity with the characters original names, this jumps from zero to 100 real quick, also why does he start off as Buff buu? You should have let him learn his shape shifting powers and then change his appearance. The idea in and of itself is great and with time and maybe a couple edits this has immense potential for a great story, just be patient and take your time.
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Thanks for the review, just to let you know the mc is a combination between Kid buu and him. You have any name ideas I was thinking of changing it anyway
He started off as buff buu because It was the form his subconscious self wanted and the shape shifting is instinct
I can think of a lot of possible names : Johnathan Matthews , Kent Rogers, David Kyle, Tony Landings, you would be surprised by how many English american names a person can come up with and they would sound fake. Chris Kyle, William Hatch, Dennis Wilson, etc. Honestly you can just look up top 100 most common english first names and then last names and just grab any of the two.
Librarian_2023:Thanks for the review, just to let you know the mc is a combination between Kid buu and him. You have any name ideas I was thinking of changing it anyway
