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The prologue is interesting. If I'm really into romance like I was years ago, I would have definitely read this all the way. Gangsters and fights, it seems to be the main theme. The writing although neat, may need a little more creativity mostly with the dialogue tags. But overall, it was good. The constant switching of POV's gives plenty of action and perspective, however, it's all too much for a reader who doesn't know them well yet and may confuse them to others. Sticking to one would be better to let the reader settle in first before switching to other characters. Plot is interesting and the characters as well, have mysterious backgrounds. Keep up the good work.

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