Review Detail of Sach_Official in project yestjl

hmm, as a fellow readers (yes, I'm a huge bingie reader too despite being an author!) I would say some things here. Not as an author, but as a reader myself who love to craving for some brain food in the midnight! - Try not to overusing words "The" and "," punctuation. It was pretty messy when you are using those two too much. - Avoid dumping information in bracket, it was a huge turn off for many readers. Good thing that I'm a readers who used with MTL, so this is not a big deal for me, but may be a huge deal for many readers. Example: ...... where human and monos (....)-> you can discard this info in the bracket. Maybe you can replace it with .....where the human and the unique being with some superb abilities named monos who ..... or second option, you can just continue without those explanation and save the info later in aux chapters (most of my fav book has this one!) grammar side, I won't comment much since I have no rights to comment this as I'm not a good grammar checker as well. Hope it could help and cheers buddy, welcome to the writing club of WN!