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2021-12-21 12:20

my biggest problem with this is that it has info dump after info dump, fillers with only world building one after another. i dont mind having a novel that expands in its world design, but seriously, not even 50 chapters in, you havent even let the mc get in his mobile base, and youre focusing on world building already? this story should focus on the mc and his mobile base not on some other side characters family background and entire history as well as their ideals and revelations. not to mention there isnt even a proper frame work or general understanding in the world yet youre already sweating the small details. its so borimg and repetetive and im not even in the 50 chapter mark yet. priorities author, priorities.

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