Review Detail of AppleyGod in My Idle Gaming System

Author got to chapter 36 and decided "yeah, this is where I'll ruin the story." The MC's stupid mother gets herself killed, and then the father, KNOWING HE'LL DIE 100%, goes and does the same thing and dies pointlessly. Then, the MC and his sister also almost die and the LEADER OF THE ENEMY comes and says not to kill them or they won't have a work force. Horrible plot armor, even for a Webnovel. So lame. Would've been great to just have the mother die. Side note, the grammar is bad. There's a few slip-ups every few chapters, messing up entire words or changing pronouns.