Review Detail of Exxalted in The Legendary Daddy Merchant

Going good, A system novel genre, the updates are going on a good pace. World and character development is alright, but I gotta hand it to you, your writing quality is 4.5/5, the only reason you're missing 0.5 is because there are some words that I think should be changed. Maybe, I don't know, because I'm not that good in english, I'd say I'm decent. but what I've read so far already satisfied me, keep it going.