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Review Detail of Xedornox in In Naruto with a GOLDEN FINGER.

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Xedornox
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Story is terrible. Author has the MC chose to be a Perfect Kryptonian with access to a superpowerful form of chakra along with perfect Uzumaki bloodline, yet despite this he doesn't use his Kyrptonian powers, he intentially has the MC fight in battles he could end within seconds while writting it like the MC was having trouble and worst of all -without any spoilers- forced multuple situations to build dramatic tension that the MC could solve within moments but instead choses not too for dramatic tension.

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In Naruto with a GOLDEN FINGER.

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DURJOY_Barua
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Thehighesthol1:
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HankTheFisherMan
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Thanks for the warning

Herbivore
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thx for that. Worth author always "forget" the power of their own hero to creat false suspens

trueidiocy_577
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nah what you talking about?He wrecked everyone lol. No one has managed to make him to even bleed yet

Xedornox
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That's not the point I was making, the review is intentionally vague so as to not spoil any of the stories content. Regardless of that the MC is a perfect kryptonian, the weakest kryptonian Ursa could destroy solar systems and was not a perfect kryptonian like the MC. The mc has all the powers and abilities of a Kryptonian but he barely makes use of them, he has shown to be faster than light but struggles in battles against people who are not that fast, he is using chakra and jutsu which makes sense as it is the world of Naruto but what doesn't is him fightning like a one piece character, him recreating that one move where they kick like ten or seven times was entirely pointless as he can fly already. The matter of his charka is also needing to be stated, as a perfect kryptonian who's body is under constant evolution while he stands in the range of a yellow sun then his physical and mental energies should be immense meaning even without training he should have a constantly growing chakra reserve this is without taking into account the fact his charka can be further molded with solar energy to increase it's power and potency, yet despite this he only has kage level reserves from what I last remember -I could be wrong on that though- another is his need to amp himself with chakra to increase his perception and increase the speed of his thoughts and stuff, again as a kryptonian who can while under the yellow sun think faster than a supercomputer this should not be needed yet he need's it? It might be he simply is not used to being a kryptonian seeing as he was a human before and thus is limiting himself but I have seen no mention of such a thing.

trueidiocy_577:nah what you talking about?He wrecked everyone lol. No one has managed to make him to even bleed yet
Sham_Pain
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Kinda true, but if you squint your eyes and believe with all your heart you might be able to trick yourself into thinking its because he's like 8 (even if that's bs)

Xedornox:That's not the point I was making, the review is intentionally vague so as to not spoil any of the stories content. Regardless of that the MC is a perfect kryptonian, the weakest kryptonian Ursa could destroy solar systems and was not a perfect kryptonian like the MC. The mc has all the powers and abilities of a Kryptonian but he barely makes use of them, he has shown to be faster than light but struggles in battles against people who are not that fast, he is using chakra and jutsu which makes sense as it is the world of Naruto but what doesn't is him fightning like a one piece character, him recreating that one move where they kick like ten or seven times was entirely pointless as he can fly already. The matter of his charka is also needing to be stated, as a perfect kryptonian who's body is under constant evolution while he stands in the range of a yellow sun then his physical and mental energies should be immense meaning even without training he should have a constantly growing chakra reserve this is without taking into account the fact his charka can be further molded with solar energy to increase it's power and potency, yet despite this he only has kage level reserves from what I last remember -I could be wrong on that though- another is his need to amp himself with chakra to increase his perception and increase the speed of his thoughts and stuff, again as a kryptonian who can while under the yellow sun think faster than a supercomputer this should not be needed yet he need's it? It might be he simply is not used to being a kryptonian seeing as he was a human before and thus is limiting himself but I have seen no mention of such a thing.
Random_0P_Being
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Even tho their's a Perfect before kryptonian in the end he is only a normal kryptonian and dosen't have the codex or super man gene the only reason he is a Perfect kryptonian is because he doesn't have any of the weaknesses so it's reasonable he dosen't have all those fancy power's

Xedornox
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Isn't the only perfect kryptonian Superman/Clark Kent who has the codex and special genes from Rao? That's what I took from "Perfect Kryptonian with no weaknesses" I felt it was heavily implied because Clark is the only perfect Kryptonian.

Random_0P_Being:Even tho their's a Perfect before kryptonian in the end he is only a normal kryptonian and dosen't have the codex or super man gene the only reason he is a Perfect kryptonian is because he doesn't have any of the weaknesses so it's reasonable he dosen't have all those fancy power's
Random_0P_Being
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I mean you can say that but then again Clark was a Natural born and even though he had the codex he still had the weaknesses of the kryptonian and though it get resolved and he becomes a Perfect Kryptonian he's special in the first place as he had all the knowledge from his ship about his race and their power's but here our mc dosen't have anything though i do see that the Author made the Mc pretty dumb even if he has the so called "Devine Talent" it sounds great and all but it isn't really great like even when he's been learning stuff for so long since from age like 3? He's still has very limited ability all I've seen so far is finger gun and sealing chain it really is kinda overrated.

Xedornox:Isn't the only perfect kryptonian Superman/Clark Kent who has the codex and special genes from Rao? That's what I took from "Perfect Kryptonian with no weaknesses" I felt it was heavily implied because Clark is the only perfect Kryptonian.
Huntsman
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His age is a problem, I think? He hasn't bathed under the sun anywhere near the amount Superman did. Another problem is not all Kryptonians are capable of the same feats, it depends on the alteration. Some version of Superman can be put down by metahuman lightning... Also, I'm pretty sure Ursa is not the weakest kryptonian. She's maybe the weakest amongst those surviving, but she's one bred and made for wars, bro.

Xedornox:Isn't the only perfect kryptonian Superman/Clark Kent who has the codex and special genes from Rao? That's what I took from "Perfect Kryptonian with no weaknesses" I felt it was heavily implied because Clark is the only perfect Kryptonian.
Venerable_Far
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this is why having an mc with a huge range of abilities isn't good, no matter whether its a fanfic or a cultivation novel

Herbivore:thx for that. Worth author always "forget" the power of their own hero to creat false suspens
Thehighesthol1
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Maximus_Demon
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thanks for letting me know