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Franklin_Donald_3142
Franklin_Donald_3142Lv113yr
2021-07-15 08:22

while my review might seem generous I really love your work, I can see the resolve in going strong with a character, hope this works out, good luck

The Sex Beast System (Revamped) [The World Of Systems]

Roeselawik_2
4.7
29 Chs

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Roeselawik_2
Roeselawik_2Author

Hey guys! This is not plagiarized work, I am the original author! Some problem was going on with SBS on my main account, so I decided to re-upload the latest re-edited version! Release rate will be 1 edited chapter/ day until I am caught up. Please rate and enjoy!!!!! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

3yr

Roeselawik
RoeselawikLv3

I thought I should comment with my main account as well, so that people won't be confused. Yes, this is me. :) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

3yr
Draigofenixe
DraigofenixeLv5

Spanish: Bien que regresaste, pensé que ya no había para mas. Sigue así con la excelente novela. Ojala no te tome mucho tiempo subir todos los capítulos antiguos y por supuesto los nuevos.

3yr
siniestracalceta
siniestracalcetaLv4

First of all, its sad that all your worked got "lost" because of problems in your other account, Second, and the actual review, is that not only the Character development that the protagonist goes thru is from really harsh problems and the story is really well paced and with every new side charac. that is introduced, the understanding of the world and its society gets uncovered giving me, personally, and extreme sense of curiosity and interest to know more! but also the jokes are also on point and i love every single one! and Definitely I'm glad that i can keep reading your story with some tweaks along the way!! aaaand could you please not take so much time to get to the point you were with the other? lol

3yr
Alibi_Lullaby
Alibi_LullabyLv5

As long as the MC isn't as mentally disabled as the original novel, then I think this could be great. The plot and characters are interesting, but the MC wasn't just dumb he was literally Rè.t@rde.d and would have gone nowhere without his system, telling him some basic things like he's a child. here are some comments from any normal chapter in the original to get my point across.

1yr
badboyz999
badboyz999Lv4

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Dall_Llim
Dall_LlimLv1

too exciting very thrilling 🫡🫡🫡I love ❤️ it

1yr
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

What a nice title. 5 stars for no yuri. I ll give a go for sure.

1yr
Sun_Set_6920
Sun_Set_6920Lv1

Конечно жаль, что теперь придется подождать пока не дойдет до момента с королевством эльфов, но я очень благодарен за то, что вы не забросили данное произведение Ll

2yr
Mouli_Kaur
Mouli_KaurLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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