This is story is great! The sypnosis is very interesting. if you love actions stories this one is great to try. This story deserves a lot of readers and support! You're a great author!😊

Okay, firstly this is some fantastic execution of plot. The first chapter is captivating and keeps the readers interest till the very end. All in all a great way to start the story. Now what I didn't like was confusing dialogue quotations and punctuation mistakes. Though as we progress further in the story these mistakes reduce in number so, I might be nitpicking here. Other than that the story is fantastic.

I'm a sucker for action novel so you know I had to read this one. Excellent writing from the author and an interesting premise. English is very good and readable, far exceeds basic webnovel stories. A real page turner, highly recommend it!

Looks okay

The writing is good, the updates are consistent, the story development seems solid, the characters are original, and the background seems to be well thought out. Still, I'd enjoy seeing a bit more focus on the description of the setting and what the characters look like. To the author: Feel free to check out my original Avatar The Last Airbender spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you would like.

Well, as am the type of girl that loves action very much, this book is for me. It's got the action and war scenes I like. oooooh, am on the clouds to finally see a book I could read. Good work author, keep up the good work.

This metalinguistic novel type is awesome, everyone that ever gave a try to writing or any kind of creative job know the difficulties. And this novel cover all of then perfectly, it is great to see that other have the same trouble as me.

Okay, I read a couple of chapters. It starts well. The way it's written is good. The quality of English words used here makes this novel much more easier to read. When comes to such unique plot you need lot more clarity. The Author effort is commendable. If you are here for a fresh Novel experience give it a read.

the story is great. I love your style of writing. I guarantee that this will be an amazing book. keep on updating to garner more readers! overall this is amazing..