Review Detail of Spelloyal in

I'll be honest I'm only giving 3 stars because it's rare to see a loli mc. The fanfic itself barely deserves 1,5 stars. The storie are boring, basically a mc op being op and picking up wives like someone picking vegetables at the market. Just making it clear that mc taking waifus like vegetables doesn't bother me, it will only turn into something bad if she keeps taking several without even any development with the current ones. But still boring at this moment. What bothers me the most about the fanfic is that the author didn't bother to create a fun moment like someone bumping into the mc on a date with Ophis, someone trying to trick the mc or hit on her just for Ophis to show up and hug her making them freak out, Someone trying to use the mc as a hostage against Ophis just so Ophis doesn't react and then finds out that the mc is OP, or Ophis saving the mc as a princess just for the mc to show how she is the OP herself right away and etc. I can't think of many examples right now, but it lacks the fun and interesting moments that an op mc story needs to not be boring. I also can summarize each chapter in a line or two and you wouldn't be missing out on anything funny, interesting or exciting moment that would make it worth reading anyway. In addition, other small points like the mc accepting the invitation to visit Rias' club even though he's not interested also make things boring. The mc is op and not afraid of anyone, so it would be better to ignore the invitation and let Rias come to the mc by herself thus generating some fun or interesting interactions, but with the mc just going with the flow and being opc it's all very boring .