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Really like the story apart from some inconsistencies for instance chapter 493: Dungeon 1 "Finding a core was easier said than done. Despite having killed many monsters in my life, not once have I ever found a core." But here's the thing ren found a core when he went with Kevin to get his 5-star manual. Also, another problem would be mana contracts! They can literally be used as a way to assassinate people seeing as how both parties get injured! Like wtf Ren breaks the contract and, Angelica gets hurt it doesn't make sense! Mana contracts can be used as weapons... Bruh dude that sent assassin squad to kill Emma and the other lock students should have just given them mana contracts and, trick them into signing them. Smh. Okay enough ranting. Sorry just some criticism from a fan. Anyways i'll just end this by saying I really love the interactions that Ren has with Kevin and, Melissa! 10/10! I would have loved to have seen Ren and Melissa a couple, if you could have pulled that off that would have been some real character development
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Entrail_JI
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Entrail_JI:I understand your first point, it was something that was supposed to be fixed with the rewrites. Your second point, however, is false. Firstly, they will not die from the breach of contract. Angelica didn't go through the same pain that Ren underwent. Hers was much much lighter so that in itself disproves your point. Secondly, it is impossible to trick people into signing a contract. Firstly, the price would be far too much for it to happen, and secondly mana contracts aren't made of paper, how in the world do you trick someone into signing a mana contract?
I understand your first point, it was something that was supposed to be fixed with the rewrites. Your second point, however, is false. Firstly, they will not die from the breach of contract. Angelica didn't go through the same pain that Ren underwent. Hers was much much lighter so that in itself disproves your point. Secondly, it is impossible to trick people into signing a contract. Firstly, the price would be far too much for it to happen, and secondly mana contracts aren't made of paper, how in the world do you trick someone into signing a mana contract?
Entrail_JI:I understand your first point, it was something that was supposed to be fixed with the rewrites. Your second point, however, is false. Firstly, they will not die from the breach of contract. Angelica didn't go through the same pain that Ren underwent. Hers was much much lighter so that in itself disproves your point. Secondly, it is impossible to trick people into signing a contract. Firstly, the price would be far too much for it to happen, and secondly mana contracts aren't made of paper, how in the world do you trick someone into signing a mana contract?
Entrail_JI:I understand your first point, it was something that was supposed to be fixed with the rewrites. Your second point, however, is false. Firstly, they will not die from the breach of contract. Angelica didn't go through the same pain that Ren underwent. Hers was much much lighter so that in itself disproves your point. Secondly, it is impossible to trick people into signing a contract. Firstly, the price would be far too much for it to happen, and secondly mana contracts aren't made of paper, how in the world do you trick someone into signing a mana contract?
Entrail_JI:I understand your first point, it was something that was supposed to be fixed with the rewrites. Your second point, however, is false. Firstly, they will not die from the breach of contract. Angelica didn't go through the same pain that Ren underwent. Hers was much much lighter so that in itself disproves your point. Secondly, it is impossible to trick people into signing a contract. Firstly, the price would be far too much for it to happen, and secondly mana contracts aren't made of paper, how in the world do you trick someone into signing a mana contract?
wow , i think my man is a toxic lol player , as i said before if u dont like it just leave it , idt the author will even care ..
Happy_Leaf_5190:Quit arguing and update the mf BOOK
I can't tell if the fact you can't understand a joke or the fact your riding the author so hard is funnier
GreedyBoi:wow , i think my man is a toxic lol player , as i said before if u dont like it just leave it , idt the author will even care ..
Although the comment was made a some time ago but still dude, Angelica wasn't injured because of the contract. Did u even read properly, why do think the contract was breached by Ren, it's because he helped to heal Amanda's mother who was cursed by Angelica and after as the curse was healed Angelica received damage because her curse was lifted (that's how mindbreaker curse works) and as Ren's action indirectly harmed Angelica it was considered as breach of contract in which there was a phrase written as "Both parties are forbidden from harming each other both directly and indirectly" (might not be exactly that) So you should at least read properly before spouting bs