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Started off good, but the way the author is obsessed with his female characters looks, as in we dont get one single moment that their looks are brought up whenever its a female, is honestly super frustrating and turns a relatively good story into another psuedo harem novel. I dont know if it will actually end up as a harem, but I can't keep reading full on paragraphs each time about these jade like beauties. There is not one good female character. Also the idiotic mc keeps drooling and ogling these 16 year olds when he died at over 30, so, do with that information what you may... Also, a little nitpicky, but its supposed to be set in a place where every continent (asia, South America, Africa, etc) is combined, but so far every character, specifically females, have been just another variation of jade like beauties. I mean the author even wasted time writing about one of the females porcelain feet being able to seduce any man...feet! wtf..pass
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You're irrelevant to me, so thankfully none of your replies actually effects me that much. Im not sad at all, bc you left my mind months ago. Only commented bc I just saw the notification, continue on with the mediocre writing though
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So basically this review is about how you don't like jade beauties and descriptions about them? Okay... Regarding some points. 1. MC never drooled over a 16 year old. That's false information. Falling into a slight daze and drooling are completely different things. He was just shocked by his own creating. 2. The descriptions only happen at the very beginning of the novel. 40-50 chaps when describing each female characters 3. You could've easily have skipped them if you didn't like them. This part baffles me. If you didn't like the descriptions you could've just skip them. What keeps you from reading them? Plus, the descriptions don't even happen that often, perhaps in the beginning but after that it only happens like twice or three times more. Just skip them if you don't like that.
Just seeing this bc I dropped this book months ago, but "falling into a daze" over 16 year olds, repeatedly when you are mentally in your 30s is weird. Full stop. It wasnt a slight daze, he went stupid and mute at the sight of them. I have no problem with jade beauties, otherwise I wouldn't have read as far as I did, and I wouldnt read chinese novels in general. it was the fact that EVERY. SINGLE. WOMAN. was a jade beauty, and you couldn't not describe their looks over and over, including one the womans freaking feet. Its tedious to read through. And what author tells someone to repeatedly skip parts of their work? Or you could just not add in those bad writing techniques, which happened way more frequently than you are saying. And I got annoyed because if every female is going to be a jade beauty, have it set in one continent, like other books do. What is the point of combining the worlds population into 1 large continent, when Indians, Africans, Hispanics, and Southeast Asians make up a large percentage of the world population, and then have every single female be jade white?? If you want to change real world stuff in your novel, do that, its your book, but dont be shocked and confused when people call you out on it.
Entrail_JI:So basically this review is about how you don't like jade beauties and descriptions about them? Okay... Regarding some points. 1. MC never drooled over a 16 year old. That's false information. Falling into a slight daze and drooling are completely different things. He was just shocked by his own creating. 2. The descriptions only happen at the very beginning of the novel. 40-50 chaps when describing each female characters 3. You could've easily have skipped them if you didn't like them. This part baffles me. If you didn't like the descriptions you could've just skip them. What keeps you from reading them? Plus, the descriptions don't even happen that often, perhaps in the beginning but after that it only happens like twice or three times more. Just skip them if you don't like that.
Readerofbooks123:Just seeing this bc I dropped this book months ago, but "falling into a daze" over 16 year olds, repeatedly when you are mentally in your 30s is weird. Full stop. It wasnt a slight daze, he went stupid and mute at the sight of them. I have no problem with jade beauties, otherwise I wouldn't have read as far as I did, and I wouldnt read chinese novels in general. it was the fact that EVERY. SINGLE. WOMAN. was a jade beauty, and you couldn't not describe their looks over and over, including one the womans freaking feet. Its tedious to read through. And what author tells someone to repeatedly skip parts of their work? Or you could just not add in those bad writing techniques, which happened way more frequently than you are saying. And I got annoyed because if every female is going to be a jade beauty, have it set in one continent, like other books do. What is the point of combining the worlds population into 1 large continent, when Indians, Africans, Hispanics, and Southeast Asians make up a large percentage of the world population, and then have every single female be jade white?? If you want to change real world stuff in your novel, do that, its your book, but dont be shocked and confused when people call you out on it.
Readerofbooks123:You're irrelevant to me, so thankfully none of your replies actually effects me that much. Im not sad at all, bc you left my mind months ago. Only commented bc I just saw the notification, continue on with the mediocre writing though