Review Detail of FoolishYoungMaster in The Author's POV

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Rating: 3.8

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FoolishYoungMasterLv132yrFoolishYoungMaster

This is just a first impression due to me only reading about 10 chapters so far. If the story improves then I will update my review. So far this story is very boring. Author, you do not need to explain everything that happens in the story. You mentioned the seed of limit then explained what it was, what it did, where it was found, how it impacted the main character, what other cheat items were originally meant for the MC and different sword styles all in one chapter. Why would the reader need all this information? This information could have been provided little by little giving a little bit of surprise later. I really don't like the habit that some writers have when they feel they need to explain everything to the reader. Also, stop having your character explain stuff to us. I do not need to hear about how since the original main character has other cheat items that the MC does not need to feel bad about. Who was that thought directed to?

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Entrail_JI

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Bambo0Lv1Bambo0

Go on, it’s going to get a lot more interesting. It’s not a good start, but it keeps changing and it gets really interesting[img=рекомендовать]

2yr

Entrail_JIAuthorEntrail_JI

Fair But I pretty much warned about this in advance in the *read before reading novel* section. Obviously happened because I was a newbie, hence why I made so many info dumps Will be like this for next 30-40 chaps I am currently rewriting the first 40 chaps.

2yr

FoolishYoungMasterLv13FoolishYoungMaster

I will continue to read and hope the story improves. I am looking forward to the rewritten chapters—also, kudos to you. I enormously respect authors who can take constructive criticism.

2yr

Entrail_JIAuthorEntrail_JI

Well if u want ur novel to do well, u must listen to advice. Else no one will read it

FoolishYoungMaster:I will continue to read and hope the story improves. I am looking forward to the rewritten chapters—also, kudos to you. I enormously respect authors who can take constructive criticism.

2yr