Review Detail of fateless in The Heavenly Sword Emperor

Hello Daoists, I am Fateless, a cultivator who has chosen the path of writing through The Heavenly Sword Emperor. I am not an English realm cultivator, so my early chapters were a little worse, but my English writing skills have improved since the day I started writing. If you don't believe me, you can compare my latest chapters with my past chapters, and even then, If you believe, My skills didn't improve even after a month, you can quit my novel, and I won't complain a bit. But before quitting, please provide me your valuable comment on which areas I should improve. That's my only request. But I also should think about it from the readers' point of view, so I decided to edit my early chapters for readers' convenience, but it would take some time as I decided to post two chapters daily. So for some time, you have to bear my ignorant mistakes. As far as I know, it won't be difficult for you as so many of you read novels on M.......L Sites(I can't say the name here). So I hope you would support me, Fateless.