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2021-09-22 12:53

This is my first review on this website. And I can say with confidence that this novel is one of my favourites. Its enjoyable, exciting, sad, great fight scenes and the romance is just beginning ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž. The story plot is just amazing, good character development and I love the world building. The only thing that isn't good is that, there are a couple of grammar errors but it's readable. I love this novel and you should give it a read. Thank you author for this novel ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

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Wow! It made my day. Thank you :D I'm trying to improve on this part of grammar and errors. There are some English rules that I still don't understand, but I'm studying to improve.

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All_J:Wow! It made my day. Thank you :D I'm trying to improve on this part of grammar and errors. There are some English rules that I still don't understand, but I'm studying to improve.
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