This is a story which makes you join the MC along for the ride, also all the characters in the story are introduced and described deeply making them feel alive, the only problem is going into one character to much even though they are a pawn later on such as Tara.. The MC is a definitely a high functioning sociopath, experiences in his past made him who he is now: -Uses whatever means is necessary for benefits -Sees everyone as tools he could use -Doesn't have any love for his family -Will kill innocents for his experimentations or anything that will help him reach his goal. -Has no bottom line, morals or kinship -From what I have read so far their will be no romance Disclaimer: Not for people who don't like a Neutral Evil MC.
Thieving
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LIKEUncle_Sheogorath:Evil is good and all, but from your example, he sounds more like an unfeeling alien. What's the point of life if you don't even care about anything? Doing evil deeds to benefit yourself or your family or something is more human. Otherwise, I may read more creature mc.
He is already doing things to benefit himself. It’s not a must to care about a family he has no attachments to. Why must he care about anything other than his goal? Can love preserve his life? Can love grant him his wish? This review clearly explained his character perfectly which is why it was pinned. A disclaimer is also there for you to see. Good luck with your creature mc.
Uncle_Sheogorath:Evil is good and all, but from your example, he sounds more like an unfeeling alien. What's the point of life if you don't even care about anything? Doing evil deeds to benefit yourself or your family or something is more human. Otherwise, I may read more creature mc.
So what's he gonna do with all the power? Evil dictatorships still have their fun. On other hand edgy boys.... By the way, I didn't read your web novel yet that's why I am discussing this.
Thieving:He is already doing things to benefit himself. It’s not a must to care about a family he has no attachments to. Why must he care about anything other than his goal? Can love preserve his life? Can love grant him his wish? This review clearly explained his character perfectly which is why it was pinned. A disclaimer is also there for you to see. Good luck with your creature mc.
What do you mean what is he gonna do with all that power? What’s your idea of fun? This is the story of a man pursuing strength no matter the cost. That is his end goal. Nothing else matters. He has already ‘enjoyed’ life before and where did that get him? Like I said, why should he care about anything other than his goal?
Uncle_Sheogorath:So what's he gonna do with all the power? Evil dictatorships still have their fun. On other hand edgy boys.... By the way, I didn't read your web novel yet that's why I am discussing this.
Thieving:What do you mean what is he gonna do with all that power? What’s your idea of fun? This is the story of a man pursuing strength no matter the cost. That is his end goal. Nothing else matters. He has already ‘enjoyed’ life before and where did that get him? Like I said, why should he care about anything other than his goal?