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2021-07-11 13:15

It always hit me with extreme excitement( in the despair cliche novel worlds) when after tireless searching you finally find hidden gem like this novel. This a very top-norch novel, i have no complaints so far i hope it keeps going this way though. My opionion is that i hope the mc can keep his experiments low key not doing a public display like he just did recently, after all he is too weak,an ant, causing too much fear and oppresion to those restless and idiotic nobles is a no good thing. His family can’t be touched too much at least it got to be in private coz i don’t want to see a situation where he will lose his powerful background either wiped out by enemies or expelled from a family that spells “ family first no matter what” due to a bit of carelessness or impatience to achiveve quick success, that’d be utter stupid. Knowledge and strength must be sought, but must be thru schemes and deep calculation, your backer cannot be touched when you really need it in your weak period. It’d be a pitty if he lost his background bc the way you ranked the worlds i don’t know if this will develop to other dimension and multiverse and besides Medora,his world, is big with powerful continents and forces so it’d be a waste to lose such a poweful background which can be turned into his own force to fight against other forces or dimensions**(??) This is just my opionion though, if it deems useless to you just ignore it.

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Thank you very much and I appreciate your honest input. I won't speak too much about the family or potential enemies right now to avoid revealing spoilers but what I can say is, the MC does everything with a plan in mind

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