Review Detail of Waldo_Fritzgerald in Custom Warrior

I started reading this and I was like "Wow, this is gonna be promising.", then I read the fuck up of a chapter that the first chapter was, and I just hoped that the next chapters would have been better, but nope, the protagonist didn't give a damn that his parents got freakin domed in front of him, alongside the rest of his family getting mercked as he did nothing. After dying and being given a second chance, he goes on his merry way to play sims or some shit in some kinda afterlife. In 48 hours, he realized that his parents' deaths meant nothing, and kept on going with his sims gameplay. Then for some reason, this motherfucker turned himself 12 and /tp'ed to another motherfucker's crib. And when he get's there and clearly hears Duke the child fucker, fucker of all children, say "son of victor and lydia" he straight up goes like 'oh no, anyway' on the dude. Tf? But hey, the character customization was acceptable, so props to you. Anyway, why tf is the "old man" referred to as an "old man, if he "didn't look that old". WHAT THE FUCK DOES THAT MEAN? What kinda Schrödinger's cat shit is this? And what's with the old man being "in his prime"? Is Duke a pedo or is Rex into that DILF shit? smh my head. And why can the kid make a guy glow red and disintegrate him? Thanos this you? And "don't make me die of laughter you are nowhere that, let alone beat me"... this kid straight up snapped three dudes out of existence and we're supposed to believe Duke here can whoop his ass? Nah bro. Story aside, what's up with the punctuation? Why's there two instances where it says " 'Age "? Why is there an apostrophe? If this was mistaken for a quotation mark, why was there no apostrophe at the end? And why is Duke so awkward when talking to Rex? What's with the constant laughter? We get it, he touches kids in his spare time, move on. And seriously, does the kid really not give a shit about his parents anymore? "What's done is done"???? Nah I'm done Only "lucky and creative geniuses" can wield gravity magic? Clearly, this author wouldn't be able to wield this magic either. Great story, 10/10, would recommend.