Review Detail of celestial_axis in Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

150-ish chapter review Writing The quality of this book is at the LoM level of grading. The author can make you feel anxious, happy, and many other different emotions through the thought process of the MC. I really like it when certain main characters interact with the MC like their own mother. For world development, 5/5 stars for the author.He basically explains every possible thought process of how the world is perceived by different people. From history to society. (For example, mutant uprisings and political power wizardry). For Story. I think the author has an interesting story. But the execution is a mess. By the time the story gets to the juicy part, it has already lost its color. It's like too much flashback and a lengthy canon event. (But in the Marvel volume, everything is original and I love it.) For MC development. I'm sorry, but for me it's already lost. The moment she becomes a time traveller, she becomes tasteless. The early chapter of her journey to the outside world is the most entertaining story I read in this novel. Like learning telepath, making alfred, breaking into account of evil doctor. That is the most enoyable chapter I read in this novel. But it's okay, the author is trying to cope with the student she has. I enjoy reading Jean's POV and Wanda's. But yeah. It's like you want to eat chicken nuggets but only get the fries.