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GAMING_IS_MUST
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I have to say I don't like the recent chapters where jasmine is so easily pushed around and she doesn't retaliate and the dark magic fiasco where they jasmine Nathan and Dumbledore were going in circles about dark magic and her being a dark witch she knew their concept of dark witch and hers was different but she didn't clear it up and made everyone believe she is their version of dark witch and it seemed just kinda forced

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Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

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athass_prkr
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Yeah, I get it. I admit it wasn't my best work. If it makes you feel any better, you shouldn't see something like this again in this fic. Thanks for your feedback.

DaoistJhtAYc
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I mean not really forced, I would understand if the author made it so she actually had a chance to convince them but with the personality given to everyone there except her little sister even if she cleared it up it would’ve ended the same…even in real life we have time where we believe something to be true even if we know there’s a chance it’s not.. so honestly all I saw in that chapter was an accurate display of one of human emotions

GAMING_IS_MUST
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I will hold you to that. Btw how strong is she exactly? I would assume really strong but we haven't been able to guess her real strength due to whole her having to go along with fate thing[img=update]

athass_prkr:Yeah, I get it. I admit it wasn't my best work. If it makes you feel any better, you shouldn't see something like this again in this fic. Thanks for your feedback.