From a friends point of you Its a very great first ever story its really well done and as very good spelling for a teenager. I can see you have place a lot of time on this and that the story will be more interesting more it goes on :) Just hope To know more About the Back Story of Our main character though Anyway I’m exited to see what as in Store for Our main character next chapter 😊
Onethra
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