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Review Detail of Dagda in Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!

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History is a pleasant pastime. The work of a budding author who starts writing for pure pleasure. Certainly not a work that will enter the best sellers of this millennium, but certainly not a work that people should criticize in an offensive and thinking way, especially if they leave only words without indicating a problem. In my opinion there are problems with too many swearing in sentences, a character with a strong ego or even too many POV changes ... but definitely nothing that deserves contempt or words like garbage. If you don't like the story you just have not to read it, if you see the potential you can instead indicate where in your opinion the author could improve. The stories are based on the wishes of the author and the taste of the reader. Continue with your author work

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Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!

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lazybod
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Thanks a lot man! Yeah i thought there might be too much swearing, ill cut down on it from now on! Cheers mate