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2021-08-12 11:07

A really interesting book it is something unique and honestly works well. I think the world building is the best along with the character design. It has a great premise! My only suggestion is that the Author use Grammerly or some other platform to help. Its saddening to read great books but get distracted by spelling and grammatical mistakes. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you so much for your review! I apologise for the grammar errors and mistakes. I'll check through and fix everything as soon as possible!

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