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N0B0DY3Lv53yr
2021-08-16 10:14

You can poke more holes in the plot then swiss cheese and with everything said you can always find some form of error, either what was said didn’t make sense, dumb choices, things suddenly changing the next chapter.

Transmigrated as side character, i will steal all the heroines

Rysangel
4.3
355 Chs

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Rysangel
RysangelAuthor

Hi, guys Rysangel here. Please read my two other novels too, and give some feedback. Should I continue to write that in a serious mood or should I make a new story with a more light-hearted comedic tone?

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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Mc is a slave to the system. Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system. I have read 0 chapters and will never even try this. Mc is a slave to the system.

3yr
Fly2Sky
Fly2SkyLv4

disgusted by the system and the dumb MC............................................................. . .. . .. .. . .. ,............... Б

3yr
Cosmicanalog
CosmicanalogLv10

Even getting to 40 is a great achievement, I'm having a nervous breakdown while reading, mc's stupidity and the system's horror punishments, the system and mc's speeches are hilarious, it's disgusting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
IOnlyReadNTRHentai
IOnlyReadNTRHentaiLv10

damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone. The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager. That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.

3yr
rodrigo_melo
rodrigo_meloLv2

i refuse to read stupid dialogs between the system and the protagonista, there is 2 things i hate the most: Plaina protagonist and system. I could no bare read more than 3 chapters because of this anoying system, It is the most unfunny thing i've seen in a novel till now.

3yr
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv3

Sigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldn´t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtl´s. The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter. Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel. Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..

3yr
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

bad grammar..................................................................................................................................

3yr
Divine_Onahole
Divine_OnaholeLv3

this book cant be enjoy to normal human..i lost my braincell reading this book..cant pased chapter 5..the system and the mc super anoying. super retard

3yr
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