Review Detail of brucelee5638 in Advent of Chaos

I hate that authors realise that there first few chapters are bad and expect us new viewers to suffer instead of actually fixing it to make it easier to get into because realistically if the the first few chapters have awful grammar and is a pain to read people will just not bother with the series, if the future chapters do improve with grammar i would recommend to take a break to rewrite the earlier chapters and make it better, it would help your story a lot to have a good start to it. Sorry if i come off as being harsh or simply being wrong because to be honest i haven’t read the first chapter yet, this is just my thoughts from reading the synopsis, i hope you read this and it helps.